Message of the day: giving what we have. As a christian, I realise lots of people or christians (and also me sometimes) don't give all themselves to God, because they don't think it really matters, but in reality, if we would dedicate to God part of our time, we would find peace
Sounds true. Except it's really all or nothing. Middle ground just doesn't happen. Also, not every message has to begin w/ "As a (so&so), …I realise that…"
Message can be cleaned up to utilize the valuable space more effectively.
Ex: "People don't give all of themselves…" Extended: "Here's how…"